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Applying for a government job? Your cover letter needs to be clear, compelling, and tailored to the selection criteria and role requirements. A well-written cover letter can make the difference between getting an interview or being overlooked.
For just $29, you’ll get a detailed, professional review of your government cover letter, with specific feedback to improve your chances of success.
Government Cover letter review
What you need to know about public sector cover letters
When applying for public sector jobs, your cover letter is the most important part of your application. It’s what determines whether you move forward to an interview—or if you receive that dreaded “Thank you for your application, but we regret to inform you…” email.
The difference between great candidates who get interviews and strong candidates who miss out often comes down to how well their cover letter is written. Even an average candidate can stand out and secure an interview if they:
✅ Understand how they are being assessed
✅ Know what boxes they need to tick
✅ Clearly communicate how they meet the hiring manager’s needs
But even highly qualified candidates can miss out simply because they don’t know how to structure or write their cover letter effectively.
Public Sector Cover Letter Help
Why Public Sector Cover Letters Are Different
Unlike the private sector, where a generic cover letter might work for multiple applications, government jobs require tailored cover letters. Public sector recruitment is structured and highly competitive—which means a one-size-fits-all approach won’t work. If you’re sending out the same letter to multiple roles, you’re wasting your time.
Writing a great public sector cover letter can take hours—and most people struggle with knowing what to include, how to structure their letter, or how to highlight the right experience.
Improving your cover letter is easier than you think.
My goal is simple:
✔️ Help you write one perfect cover letter—specifically for the job you really want
✔️ Save you time so you can focus on the rest of your application
Here’s how I do it:
1️⃣ Start with My Free Government Cover Letter Template
- My free public sector cover letter template includes step-by-step prompts to guide you through the process.
- Just jot down a few key examples from your experience—I’ll help refine the wording.
- If you don’t use my template, that’s fine! I can work with any draft you have.
2️⃣ Get a Professional Review in 48 Hours
- Once you upload your draft, I’ll review it within 48 hours and provide:
✅ Edits to improve clarity, structure, and impact
✅ Comments highlighting where to add stronger examples
✅ Guidance on what the hiring manager is looking for
✅ A detailed checklist to ensure your cover letter is as strong as possible
3️⃣ Expert Insights on Your Target Job
- I don’t just review your cover letter—I also analyse the job posting and role description to help you focus on the key selection criteria, focus capabilities, and any target questions you need to answer.
- I’ll give you insider hiring manager advice on what actually matters when they scan your application.
By the end of this process, you’ll have a polished, tailored, and interview-winning cover letter—and the confidence to submit your application knowing it meets government selection standards.
Cover letter review
Stop Wasting Time with a Weak Cover Letter
A bad cover letter can cost you the interview, no matter how strong your experience is. Instead of guessing what hiring managers want, get clear, expert feedback from someone who knows exactly what government recruiters look for.
For just $29, I’ll review your NSW or APS public sector cover letter and give you honest, actionable feedback to improve your chances of landing an interview.
Make Your Cover Letter Work for You—Not Against You
Your cover letter is the first impression you make—don’t let it be the reason you miss out. For just $29, you’ll get expert guidance to make your cover letter stand out.
Ready to improve your cover letter? Click below to get started.
Included with your government cover letter review
✔️ A Full Review of the Job Ad & Role Description
- I analyse the government job posting to identify what’s most important to the hiring manager.
- Covers any NSW or APS public sector role at all levels.
✔️ A Clear Checklist of Key Requirements
- Understand exactly what the hiring panel is assessing, including:
✅ Selection criteria & target questions
✅ Essential role requirements
✅ Public sector capabilities
✔️ A Complete Cover Letter Review & Edit
- I’ll go through your draft cover letter and:
✅ Make tracked changes to refine your writing
✅ Improve structure, clarity, and impact
✅ Ensure your examples meet the STAR method (Situation, Task, Action, Result)
✔️ Detailed Comments & Suggestions
- I’ll add insider advice directly in your document, highlighting:
✅ Where to add stronger examples
✅ How to showcase key skills & experience
✅ Ways to tailor your letter for maximum impact
✔️ An Honest Assessment of Your Suitability for the Role
Get a clear evaluation of how strong your application is—and what you can do to boost your chances.
Why You Need to Get Your Cover Letter Reviewed
Because most candidates don’t.
I’ve reviewed thousands of government cover letters, and the truth is clear: most applicants never get their cover letter checked before they submit it.
You know who does? The candidates who nearly always land an interview.
Successful applicants understand that feedback is the key to a strong application. They know that a fresh pair of eyes—especially from someone who understands public sector recruitment—can help spot weaknesses, refine their message, and ensure they don’t miss something obvious.
The Fastest & Easiest Way to Improve Your Cover Letter
✔️ It takes just minutes to submit your draft
✔️ You get detailed feedback within 48 hours
✔️ It’s the easiest way to make your application stronger
Even if you don’t want to invest $29 in the only dedicated public sector cover letter review, at least get someone else to check it. Ideally, someone who understands government hiring and what selection panels are really looking for.
I Want to See More Strong Candidates Get Their Dream Government Job
I don’t mind if you don’t use my service. But I’d hate for you to miss out on an interview—while another candidate, who got their cover letter reviewed, gets the opportunity instead.
If you want to make sure your cover letter gives you the best possible chance, I’m here to help. Click below to get started.
How It Works – Get Your Public Sector Cover Letter Reviewed in 48 Hours
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Get Started
Purchase a Cover Letter Review
Click the link below, enter your details, and complete your purchase.
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Practical Advice
Tell me the job you’re applying for
You’ll receive an email instantly with a short form to fill out.
You’ll need to provide the job URL of the government role you’re applying for.
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Easy to Use
Upload Your Draft Cover Letter
Don’t worry if it’s not perfect—this review is designed to help you improve.
If you need help getting started, download my free government cover letter template for step-by-step guidance.
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Get a Professional Cover Letter Review
I’ll edit and refine your cover letter, providing specific feedback on:
- Clarity and structure
- How well it meets government job requirements
- Stronger examples and key details to include
- Any missing elements that could hurt your chances
You’ll receive your improved cover letter with detailed comments and a checklist on what public sector hiring managers are looking for in your particular job.
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On Time
Receive Your Reviewed Cover Letter in 48 Hours
I’ll send back your revised cover letter within two days (or let you know if it takes longer).
If I don’t get it back to you in time to apply, I’ll refund your money.
Along with the review, I’ll give you an honest assessment of how strong your application is.
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Improve your chances
Make the Final Edits & Apply with Confidence
With my feedback, you’ll have a stronger, more polished cover letter that helps you stand out.
If you have questions, you can reply directly for additional advice.
Frequently Asked Questions
What jobs can you help me apply for?
Any public sector role in either the NSW Public Sector or the Australian Public Sector (APS).
There are normally over 3,000 vacancies being recruited across the NSW public sector. Check out this guide on how to find all the current vacancies in NSW.
How long does it take to review my cover letter?
You can expect your review within 2 days. I’ll let you know if it is going to take any longer.
How many cover letter reviews do I get?
For public sector jobs, you need to ensure that every cover letter is tailored for the specific role you are applying for.
For just $29 I will help you apply for one job. You can buy more cover letter reviews if you would like me to help you apply for multiple roles.