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Struggling to Write a Strong Public Sector Cover Letter? Get Professional Help Today.
Applying for a government job? Your government cover letter needs to be clear, compelling, and tailored to the selection criteria and role requirements. A well-written cover letter can make the difference between getting an interview or being overlooked.
For just $29, you’ll get a detailed, professional review of your government cover letter, with specific feedback to improve your chances of success. This review includes everything you need to apply.
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What you need to know about public sector cover letters
When applying for public sector jobs, your cover letter is the most important part of your application. It’s what determines whether you move forward to an interview—or if you receive that dreaded “Thank you for your application, but we regret to inform you…” email.
The difference between great candidates who get interviews and strong candidates who miss out often comes down to how well their cover letter is written. Even an average candidate can stand out and secure an interview if they:
✅ Understand how they are being assessed
✅ Know what boxes they need to tick
✅ Clearly communicate how they meet the hiring manager’s needs
But even highly qualified candidates can miss out simply because they don’t know how to structure or write their cover letter effectively.
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What’s Included With Your Cover Letter Review
| ✔️ Included Feature | Description |
|---|---|
| Everything in the Hiring Manager Assessment (value $19) | Hiring Manager Assessment Form: A custom-built assessment form tailored to the exact role you’re applying for. Includes a clear breakdown of how each part of your application will be evaluated—based on real criteria used in NSW and APS government recruitment at all levels. Expert Evaluation of Your Application: Get detailed, honest feedback on your cover letter and application. See exactly which elements meet the requirements, where you fall short, and what’s missing—so you can improve before you apply. An Honest Assessment of Your Suitability for the Role |
| A Complete Cover Letter Review & Edit | I’ll carefully review your draft cover letter, making tracked changes to refine your writing, improve the structure, and boost clarity and impact. I’ll also ensure your examples follow the STAR method—clearly outlining the Situation, Task, Action, and Result—so they align with what hiring managers expect. |
| Detailed Comments & Suggestions in an editable document | I’ll share with you a full editable document of your inmproved cover letter. You can see my insider advice directly in your document. |
| Applicant Pitch and Selection Criteria | The cover letter review includes everything you need to apply for your specific role—whether it’s an applicant pitch, responses to targeted questions, selection criteria, or other written requirements. Not sure what’s needed? No problem—I’ll review the job ad for you, identify any additional documents required, and help you write them. |
| Unlimited Revisions | After my initial review, you’ll have a cover letter that’s ready to submit with confidence. But if you make further improvements or tweaks, you’re welcome to send it back—I’ll review it again at no extra cost. |
| 🚫 What’s Not Included | |
|---|---|
| Resume or CV Review/Writing | Your resume is important—but not as important as your cover letter when it comes to government applications. To keep costs low and focus on what really matters, I only review and edit your cover letter and written responses. |
| Extra Fees | You’ll never be charged extra based on page limits, word counts, or turnaround time. The price you see is the price you pay—no surprises. |
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The Team 3Thirty Cover Letter Writing Process
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Find Your Role
Understand How To Apply
Learn how to navigate government job ads, identify key selection criteria, and craft a strong cover letter.
Use free public sector cover letter examples to see what works and how to highlight your best experience effectively.
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Draft your Cover Letter
Focus on the job requirements, not perfect wording
Use the free government cover letter template to get started—no need to worry about formatting or phrasing. Just write down your best examples and start your cover letter right now.
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For just $29, have your draft cover letter reviewed by an experienced government hiring manager.
Within 48 hours, you’ll receive a detailed custom checklist assessing how well you meet key application requirements, along with expert edits to strengthen your cover letter and improve your chances of success.
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Be the top applicant
Apply For Your Dream Job
Submit your cover letter with confidence, knowing it’s been strengthened with expert feedback. With my review and improvements, you’ll maximise your chances of landing a job interview and get closer to your dream job.
Improvement Guarantee
If I cannot significantly boost your cover letter, I’ll refund your money
On time Guarantee
If I don’t get your review back to you in time to apply, I’ll refund your money
Why You Need to Get Your Cover Letter Reviewed
Because most candidates don’t.
I’ve reviewed thousands of government cover letters, and the truth is clear: most applicants never get their cover letter checked before they submit it.
You know who does? The candidates who nearly always land an interview.
Successful applicants understand that feedback is the key to a strong application. They know that a fresh pair of eyes—especially from someone who understands public sector recruitment—can help spot weaknesses, refine their message, and ensure they don’t miss something obvious.
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The Fastest & Easiest Way to Improve Your Cover Letter
✔️ It takes just minutes to submit your draft
✔️ You get detailed feedback within 48 hours
✔️ It’s the easiest way to make your application stronger
Even if you don’t want to invest $29 in the only dedicated public sector cover letter review, at least get someone else to check it. Ideally, someone who understands government hiring and what selection panels are really looking for.
I Want to See More Strong Candidates Get Their Dream Government Job
I don’t mind if you don’t use my service. But I’d hate for you to miss out on an interview—while another candidate, who got their cover letter reviewed, gets the opportunity instead.
For just $29, I’ll review your NSW or APS public sector cover letter and give you honest, actionable feedback to improve your chances of landing an interview.
If you want to make sure your cover letter gives you the best possible chance, I’m here to help. Click below to get started.
Stop Wasting Time with a Weak Cover Letter
A bad cover letter can cost you the interview, no matter how strong your experience is. Instead of guessing what hiring managers want, get clear, expert feedback from someone who knows exactly what government recruiters look for.
Your cover letter is the first impression you make—don’t let it be the reason you miss out.
How It Works – Get Your Public Sector Cover Letter Reviewed in 48 Hours
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Get Started
Purchase a Cover Letter Review
Click the link below, enter your details, and complete your purchase.
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Practical Advice
Tell me the job you’re applying for
You’ll receive an email instantly with a short form to fill out.
You’ll need to provide the job URL of the government role you’re applying for.
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Easy to Use
Upload Your Draft Cover Letter
Don’t worry if it’s not perfect—this review is designed to help you improve.
If you need help getting started, download my free government cover letter template for step-by-step guidance.
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inclusions
Get a Professional Cover Letter Review
I’ll edit and refine your cover letter, providing specific feedback on:
- Clarity and structure
- How well it meets government job requirements
- Stronger examples and key details to include
- Any missing elements that could hurt your chances
You’ll receive your improved cover letter with detailed comments and a checklist on what public sector hiring managers are looking for in your particular job.
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On Time
Receive Your Reviewed Cover Letter in 48 Hours
I’ll send back your revised cover letter within two days (or let you know if it takes longer).
If I don’t get it back to you in time to apply, I’ll refund your money.
Along with the review, I’ll give you an honest assessment of how strong your application is.
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Improve your chances
Make the Final Edits & Apply with Confidence
With my feedback, you’ll have a stronger, more polished cover letter that helps you stand out.
If you have questions, you can reply directly for additional advice.
Frequently Asked Questions
What jobs can you help me apply for?
Any public sector role in either the NSW Public Sector or the Australian Public Sector (APS).
There are normally over 3,000 vacancies being recruited across the NSW public sector. Check out this guide on how to find all the current vacancies in NSW.
Can you just write my public sector cover letter?
I believe that the fastest and most effective way to help you apply is to give you heaps of free resources so that you can write a good government cover letter, even if it is just an outline. This includes all the example cover letters and my proven government cover letter template.
Then – to make your cover letter excellent – I review your cover letter for just $29. This includes unlimited revisions.
I normally write my own cover letters—how much can you really help?
Honestly, I write my own cover letters too. But one thing I’ve always done is get them reviewed by someone who knows government recruitment. Being in the public sector makes this easy—I can ask someone who won’t just check for typos but will actually analyse the job ad and tell me if my cover letter ticks all the right boxes.
Even if you’re already great at writing government cover letters, I’d love the chance to review yours. If I can’t add any value, I’ll happily refund your money—and probably thank you for teaching me something new!
The job closes today – can you review it?
Normally – yes. I can jump onto review requests straight away, particularly if they are needed the same day.
If you buy a cover letter review and I don’t get it back to you with time to apply – I’ll refund your money. And I’ll never charge extra for express delivery.
Do you only review the cover letter? What about target questions?
The cover letter review includes any part of your application that is specific to the role you apply for. If the job requires you to respond to target questions. selection criteria or write an applicant pitch, I’ll help with all of it.
Can you help me with my CV or Resume?
If you get your cover letter reviewed and you would like me to give you feedback on your resumes, I am happy to. But this isn’t a key part of this service. I’m not a resume writer or a resume designer. If you’re looking for those services, check out my assessment of your best options.
How long does it take to review my cover letter?
You can expect your review within 2 days. I’ll let you know if it is going to take any longer. And if you don’t get it back in time to apply before the closing date you will get a full refund.
Are there page limits or word counts that are included?
I’ll help you craft exactly what you need for a strong application. If the job ad asks for a five-page cover letter and responses to target questions, that’s what I’ll help with.
No add-on fees. No page limits. You’ll never pay more than $29 per job application.
How many cover letter reviews do I get?
For public sector jobs, every cover letter needs to be tailored to the specific role you’re applying for.
For just $29, I’ll help you apply for one job. If you’re applying for multiple roles, you can purchase additional cover letter reviews as needed.