Get feedback from a hiring manager before you apply
Honest, expert feedback for your cover letter
Professional Feedback. Fast Turnaround.
Get expert insight on your government job application when it matters most.
Government Cover letter review
Get Feedback When It Actually Helps
You’ve put in the effort. Maybe even had an interview. Then comes the email: “We regret to advise you were unsuccessful.”
It stings—and suddenly you’re offered feedback… but only after the fact.
This is often the worst time to hear it. You’re disappointed, emotionally drained, and the feedback (if you get any) is vague at best—“strong field of candidates,” “others were a better fit,” “just unlucky.”
What if you could get feedback before you apply?
I’m a hiring manager, and I’ve reviewed hundreds of government applications. I know what hiring panels are actually looking for—and I’m offering that insight upfront, not after it’s too late.
expert government cover letter assessment
Stop Wasting Time with a Weak Cover Letter
A bad cover letter can cost you the interview, no matter how strong your experience is. Instead of guessing what hiring managers want, get clear, expert feedback from someone who knows exactly what government recruiters look for.
For just $19, I’ll give you a genuine hiring manager assessment—just like the forms I use when shortlisting candidates.
Here’s what you’ll get in my hiring manager assessment:
- A breakdown of the key criteria likely being used for the role
- A real assessment of your draft cover letter or application
- Clear, honest feedback on whether you’re likely to land an interview—and how to improve if not
Stop guessing. Start applying with confidence.
Get feedback before you hit submit.
Included in the Hiring Manager Assessment for $19
✔️ Hiring Manager Assessment Form
A custom-built assessment form tailored to the exact role you’re applying for.
Includes a clear breakdown of how each part of your application will be evaluated—based on real criteria used in NSW and APS government recruitment at all levels.
✔️ Expert Evaluation of Your Application
Get detailed, honest feedback on your cover letter and application.
See exactly which elements meet the requirements, where you fall short, and what’s missing—so you can improve before you apply.
✔️ An Honest Assessment of Your Suitability for the Role
Looking for More? Consider a Full Cover Letter Review for Just $29
✔️ Everything in the Hiring Manager Assessment (value $19)
✔️ A Complete Cover Letter Review & Edit
- I’ll go through your draft cover letter and:
✅ Make tracked changes to refine your writing
✅ Improve structure, clarity, and impact
✅ Ensure your examples meet the STAR method (Situation, Task, Action, Result)
✔️ Detailed Comments & Suggestions
- I’ll add insider advice directly in your document, highlighting:
✅ Where to add stronger examples
✅ How to showcase key skills & experience
✅ Ways to tailor your letter for maximum impact
Fast and Effective Government Cover Letter Assessment
Get expert feedback before you apply—so you can apply with confidence.
The process is simple:
- Purchase a Hiring Manager Assessment
You’ll instantly receive an email with a secure link to upload your draft cover letter and share the job you’re applying for. - I Review the Role
I start straight away—reviewing the actual job ad, selection criteria, and what hiring managers are likely looking for. - Custom Assessment Form
I create a tailored Hiring Manager Assessment Form that mirrors how government applications are reviewed. This shows you exactly how your application will be scored—and what’s expected. - Your Application, Scored and Reviewed
Using the form, I evaluate your cover letter against the role’s requirements. You’ll see clearly where you’re meeting expectations—and where improvements are needed. - My Final Verdict
I give you my honest, expert assessment:
- Are you likely to get shortlisted?
- Have you shown that you’re the right fit?
- Is this job aligned with your strengths?
This is the fastest, most practical way to get real, actionable feedback from someone who knows how government hiring really works.
Frequently Asked Questions
What jobs can you help me apply for?
Any public sector role in either the NSW Public Sector or the Australian Public Sector (APS).
There are normally over 3,000 vacancies being recruited across the NSW public sector. Check out this guide on how to find all the current vacancies in NSW.
Can you just write my public sector cover letter?
I believe that the fastest and most effective way to help you apply is to give you heaps of free resources so that you can write a good government cover letter, even if it is just an outline. This includes all the example cover letters and my proven government cover letter template.
Then – to make your cover letter excellent – I can either give you a hiring manager assessment, or do a full review your cover letter for just $29. This includes unlimited revisions.
I normally write my own cover letters—how much can you really help?
Honestly, I write my own cover letters too. But one thing I’ve always done is get them reviewed by someone who knows government recruitment. Being in the public sector makes this easy—I can ask someone who won’t just check for typos but will actually analyse the job ad and tell me if my cover letter ticks all the right boxes.
Even if you’re already great at writing government cover letters, I’d love the chance to review yours. If I can’t add any value, I’ll happily refund your money—and probably thank you for teaching me something new!
The job closes today – can you review it?
Normally – yes. I can jump onto requests straight away, particularly if they are needed the same day.
If you buy a hiring manger assessment and I don’t get it back to you with time to apply – I’ll refund your money. And I’ll never charge extra for express delivery.
Do you only review the cover letter? What about target questions?
The hiring manager assessment includes any part of your application that is specific to the role you apply for. If the job requires you to respond to target questions. selection criteria or write an applicant pitch, I’ll help with all of it.
What’s the difference between a Hiring Manager Assessment and a Full Cover Letter Review?
The hiring manager assessment includes a detailed assessment form that outlines the key criteria your application is likely to be judged against. I’ll evaluate how well your current cover letter meets those requirements—and give you honest feedback on whether I’d shortlist you. It’s a clear, no-fluff insight into how your application stacks up from a hiring manager’s perspective.
The full cover letter review includes everything that is included in the hiring manager assessment, plus a full edit of your cover letter. I’ll improve the structure, sharpen the writing, align your content with the focus capabilities, and add comments with suggestions to take it even further. You’ll get back a completed hiring manager assessment form, a professionally updated cover letter (fully editable) and tailored advice to help you submit with confidence.
Can you help me with my CV or Resume?
This isn’t a part of this service. I’m not a resume writer or a resume designer. If you’re looking for those services, check out my assessment of your best options.
How long does it take to assess my cover letter?
You can expect your hiring manager assessment within 2 days. I’ll let you know if it is going to take any longer. And if you don’t get it back in time to apply before the closing date you will get a full refund.