Get Expert APS Job Application Feedback for Just $39
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Are you confident with your APS pitch? Get real feedback from a real hiring manager.
Are you applying for a role in the Australian Public Service?
They certainly don’t make it easy for candidates do they?
It can be hard to work out even what you need to submit. Between the job ad, the ideal candidate description, the work tasks and duties, the Integrated Leadership System, Work Level Standards, selection criteria, and more, it can be hard to know what to write in your APS Pitch.
And you have a word limit. Maybe 1000 words? Or as few as 500 words?
The shorter, the harder. It means less space for you to craft clear and relevant examples that align to the role.
As a government hiring manager with years of experience reviewing applications, I think this makes it too hard for strong candidates to land a role they would be great at. You’ve got the skills to do the job, but you don’t have the experience applying for government jobs. This means you will likely miss out, to someone who might be less experienced but can tell better stories.
Lets fix that.
For just $39, I want to keep your APS written application out of the bin and onto the shortlist.
I will read all of the job ad and candidate information I can find, and write a clear checklist to use so I can assess your application before you apply. Using just a draft of your application, I will make sure you address the most important and relevant skills and experience. You will have such clear examples that it will be hard for the hiring panel to justify not giving you an interview.
APS written application reviews included everything you need to get shortlisted.
“Thank you so much for your help. This is really clear, thorough and helpful. I really appreciate the quick turnaround too!”
Amanda
APS Applicant Pitch
“Incredibly helpful and knowledgeable.”
James
APS 4 Application – 5-Star Google Review
APS Government Written AppLication
What you need to know about APS applications
When applying for a government job in the APS, your written pitch is the most important part of your application.
Each job application is different, but you’ll need to write a cover letter, applicant pitch or statement of claims. No matter what is needed, you need your written application to do one thing: get you shortlisted.
To get shortlisted – you need clear, well structured and detailed examples of how you’ve demonstrated the skills and experience needed for the role.
This is hard.
It is hard when you haven’t done the job. It is hard when you haven’t worked in government. It is hard when you don’t know what level of information to give. And it is really hard when you only have 700 words (or less) to address multiple criterion.
I will make it easier.
By purchasing an APS written application review, you will make your life so much easier. All you need to do is find the government job you want, start a quick draft of what key stories you want to share with the hiring panel, then send me your draft.
I’ll review your draft and give you clear, actionable feedback on:
- If your examples hit the mark
- If your example have enough (or too much) detail
- If your examples align with the selection criteria – and what is missing
- How to sharpen your responses for maximum impact
- The critical gaps or missing requirements that could cost you an interview
I will also give you an updated version of your cover letter, complete with my detailed edits to show you exactly what hiring managers are looking for.
You get to use my expert feedback before you apply, so your application is stronger and clearer than your competition.
Get Expert Help With No Risk
Improvement Guarantee
If I cannot significantly boost your APS application, I’ll refund your money
On time Guarantee
If I don’t get your review back to you in time to apply, I’ll refund your money
Nail Your Application – Government Application Help That Works (and Won’t Break the Bank)
What’s Included With Your APS Application Review
| ✔️ Included Feature | Description |
|---|---|
| Detailed, clear hiring manager assessment. | Hiring Manager Assessment Form: A custom-built assessment form tailored to the exact role you’re applying for. Includes a clear breakdown of how each part of your application will be evaluated—based on real criteria used in APS government recruitment at all levels. Get clear on what you need to address in your application. An Honest Assessment of Your Suitability for the Role: I will tell you what I think you need to do before you apply to make your application stronger. I’ll be honest, and let you know exactly how competitive you are for the role. |
| A Complete APS Application Review & Edit | I’ll carefully review your APS Pitch, Cover Letter and/or Statement of Claims, making tracked changes to refine your writing, improve the structure, and boost clarity and impact. I’ll ensure your examples follow the STAR method—clearly outlining the Situation, Task, Action, and Result—so they align with what hiring managers expect. |
| Detailed Comments & Suggestions in an editable document | I’ll share with you a full editable document of your improved application documents. You can see my insider advice directly in your document. |
| Applicant Pitch, Statement of Claims and Selection Criteria | The APS application review covers everything required for your specific role. Whatever the agency asks you to submit—whether it’s a pitch, selection criteria, or statement of claims—I’ll review it thoroughly to help you maximise your chances of getting shortlisted. Not sure what’s needed? No problem—I’ll review the job ad for you, identify any additional documents required, and help you write them. |
| Unlimited Revisions | After my initial review, you’ll have a clear and effective application that’s ready to submit with confidence. But if you make further improvements or tweaks, you’re welcome to send it back—I’ll review it again at no extra cost. |
| 🚫 What’s Not Included | |
|---|---|
| Resume or CV Review/Writing | Your resume is important—but not as important as your cover letter when it comes to government applications. To keep costs low and focus on what really matters, I only review and edit your cover letter and written responses. |
| Extra Fees | You’ll never be charged extra based on page limits, word counts, or turnaround time. The price you see is the price you pay—no surprises. |
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Team 3Thirty APS Written Application Review Process
01
Find Your Role
Understand How To Apply
Learn how to navigate government job ads, identify key selection criteria, and craft a strong cover letter.
I offer a range of free resources to help candidates find government jobs. This includes free public sector cover letter examples to see what works and how to highlight your best experience effectively.
02
Draft your Cover Letter
Focus on the job requirements, not perfect wording
Use the free APS pitch template to get started—no need to worry about formatting or phrasing. Just think of your best examples and start writing.
03
For just $39, have your draft APS application reviewed by an experienced government hiring manager.
Within 48 hours, you’ll receive a detailed custom checklist assessing how well you meet key application requirements, along with expert edits to strengthen your examples and improve your chances of success.
04
Be the top applicant
Apply For Your Dream Job
Submit your application with confidence, knowing it’s been strengthened with expert feedback. With my review and improvements, you’ll maximise your chances of landing a job interview and get closer to your dream job.
Why You Need to Get Your APS Application Cover Letter Reviewed
Because most candidates don’t.
I’ve reviewed thousands of government applications, and the truth is clear: most applicants never get their writing checked before they submit it.
They write really strong examples, that sound amazing on their own. But they don’t link it to the role requirements. Or they miss giving an example of the most relevant skill.
You know who does get their application reviewed?
The candidates who land an interview.
Government insiders have an advantage. It isn’t because they have some secret code, but they have the ability to get expert feedback. Internal applicants ask their peers or their boss to check their application.
They know that a fresh pair of eyes—especially from someone who understands public sector recruitment—can help spot weaknesses, refine their message, and ensure they don’t miss something obvious.
Let’s level the playing field.
The Fastest & Easiest Way to Improve Your APS Application
✔️ It takes just minutes to submit your draft
✔️ You get detailed feedback within 48 hours
✔️ It’s the easiest way to make your application stronger
Even if you don’t want to invest $39 in the best APS government job application review available, at least get someone else to check it. Ideally, someone who understands government hiring and what selection panels are really looking for.
I completely understand if you decide not to use my service. But I’d hate to see you miss out on an interview, while someone with less experience gets shortlisted simply because they had their application reviewed and fine-tuned.
Really want to get a government job? Invest in your application
For just $39, I’ll review your APS application and give you honest, actionable feedback to improve your chances of landing an interview.
Your application is the first impression you make. It will determine if you get the job or not. Don’t let it be the reason you miss out.
Frequently Asked Questions
What jobs can you help me apply for?
Any government jobs in the Australian Public Sector (APS).
You can also get help with your NSW Government application here.
Can you just write my application for me?
I believe that the fastest and most effective way to help you apply is to give you heaps of free resources so that you can write a good government cover letter, even if it is just an outline. This includes all the example applications for real government vacancies and the easy to use template.
Then – to make your application excellent – I review your pitch for just $39. This includes unlimited revisions.
I normally write my own cover letters—how much can you really help?
Honestly, I write my own cover letters too.
But one thing I’ve always done is get them reviewed by someone who knows government recruitment. Being in the public sector makes this easy—I can ask someone who won’t just check for typos but will actually analyse the job ad and tell me if my cover letter ticks all the right boxes.
Even if you’re already great at writing government applications, I’d love the chance to review yours. If I can’t add any value, I’ll happily refund your money—and probably thank you for teaching me something new!
The job closes today – can you review it?
Normally – yes. I can jump onto review requests straight away, particularly if they are needed the same day.
If you buy a review and I don’t get it back to you with time to apply – I’ll refund your money. And I’ll never charge extra for express delivery.
Do you only review the APS applicant pitch?
The APS Application Review includes any part of your application that is specific to the role you apply for. If the job requires you to respond to target questions, selection criteria or write an applicant pitch, I’ll help with all of it.
Can you help me with my CV or Resume?
If you get your APS application reviewed and you would like me to give you feedback on your resumes, I am happy to. But this isn’t a key part of this service. I’m not a resume writer or a resume designer.
If you’re looking for those services, check out my assessment of your best options.
How long does it take to review my APS application?
You can expect your review within 2 days. I’ll let you know if it is going to take any longer. And if you don’t get it back in time to apply before the closing date you will get a full refund.
Are there page limits or word counts that are included?
I’ll help you craft exactly what you need for a strong application. If the job ad asks for a five-page cover letter and responses to target questions, that’s what I’ll help with.
No add-on fees. No page limits. You’ll never pay more than $39 per job application.
How many APS job applications do I get?
For APS jobs, every single application needs to be tailored to the specific role you’re applying for. You can’t re-use applicant pitches, you need to edit and update each time or you won’t get shortlisted.
For just $39, I’ll help you apply for one job. If you’re applying for multiple roles, you can purchase additional reviews as needed.